Writer Spotlight: YA Author Inteview - Juli Helms

Juli Helms
Today I'm please to have Juli Helms here. Juli, thanks for stepping into the spotlight and welcome!! Love the picture, btw.

What manuscript do you have out on submission now? (genre, title, word count)

OPPOSITION, a 70,000 words YA Fantasy, is a mix of Greek and Chinese mythology set on an invisible continent.

Wow,  invisible!! That's different. Very cool.

Give us the three to four sentence pitch.

Sure! This has not been edited thoroughly, though, so obviously it’s not perfect.

LOL, do we ever think our work is perfect?

The Aerisians—people living on the invisible, floating continent of Aeris—were given a power beyond the elements and a legendary task centuries ago: protect the Yin Shadow and the Yang Light, the syzygy that makes up the balance of the Earth. But in the week Atalanta Raire turns fifteen, suddenly the Light is stolen, her sister goes missing, and the only thing Ata can do is go to the Earth Plane, where there are much more to find than just a lost sister and a pilfered Light.

Ooooh, nice!!! Love the name Ata, too.

Would you care to share the opening lines or paragraphs?

The first thing I see when I rise out of hiding is a stumbling sun. It used to be so bright. It used to warm my fingers, my skin, tickle my feet and glow just as bright. Now, as I see it again after a full year of darkness, it trips in its path and dips low over the horizon, spilling bucketfuls of light.
            Walls pressed around me before. Walls of flame, the Circle, fire licking my conscience and sanity until I went insane.
            Insane, like everyone else.

           Eisa--the first adult we've seen in a year--came to us today, finally, she opened the door for us. I have never felt so lonely. There was a hundred girls trapped with me.
            They stopped crying in two days.

            They stopped talking in a week.

            And they stopped thinking, stopped trying, in a month.

            Every time I looked at them, they would stare at me with glassy eyes, reflecting nothing but my own misery. They would pick solberries as silently as the dead; they acted like the dead. I tried to shake one of them out of their trance once, Laurie, and all I felt was cold.

Ominous beginning. Makes me wonder, stop trying to what, why were they locked away, why only one girl is able to be herself? I love the phrase, "stumbling sun."

The rest of the story isn't as direct/somber/horrific as this (mostly), I promise. :)

I like it. Sets the a nice tone.

What is your least and most favorite word? Use each in a sentence, writing in the voice of one of your characters from any of your manuscripts.

Oh man, this is a HARD one. Hmm...

Hee, hee, so I've heard : )

Originality.
            Rachael’s paintings are such beautiful disasters. The brush moves in her hand more naturally than she breathes. Upon close inspection, the strokes are nothing but blossoms of ink. Farther away, they are connected arc by line, dot by dash, into the one thing her work is known for, the one thing that lights up the whole masterpiece, making the paint erupt with beauty: originality.

My least favorite word is probably “in”. In does more telling than showing, such as “she screamed in fear”, so I try to avoid it to the best of my abilities. :)

Nice.

What are you working on while you wait?

I’m writing debate cases (I’m the first place speaker in my league, which adds a thick layer of pressure), music, and I blog. :)

Based on your picture, I wonder if photography is also a hobby of yours : )

What book have you read in the past six mo that’s inspired you and why? 

Definitely Lola and the Boy Next Door by Stephanie Perkins. Reading that book was like riding on a shooting star! The realism in that book makes a myriad of emotions explode in your chest, and that type of connection with the reader is definitely rare to find. Also, Across the Universe by Beth Revis. The horrifyingly beautiful beginning and unbelievably twisty ending both affected my writing, consciously and unintentionally.

Do you have (if you were a teen, or had when you were a teen) a literary-character crush?

Hands down Cricket Bell (from Lola and the Boy Next Door). He’s well-dressed, energetic, funny and, oh yeah, invents things. And he can do amazing things with your hair. He’ll also tell you these beautiful fairytale stories about his everlasting love for you. It sounds cheesy, but coming from Cricket, it’s more adorable than those cat pictures I know you all aww at.
Pictures like this:

(www.entertainmentpk.com)


awww....

Yes, AWWW!!

Any random fun-facts you’d like to share about yourself?

I like to impersonate accents. On a good day, I’ll just stick with the British. On a... not-so-good day, my native Chinese accent trying to speak Russian with a French accent is about as confusing as it reads. Also, my friend and I once performed as “ninja mimes with crêpes” for the Talent Show in middle school. Needless to say, the audience got quite the look on their faces, but that all changed when they got their hands on my friend’s famous crêpes (a crêpe, in case you don’t know, is a French dessert kind of like a pancake. It’s also the best thing in the world). Their expressions also changed when I stole the crêpes all back from them and ate it rapaciously, but that’s beside the point.

LOL, I would NOT have given you my crepe back without a fight :  ) LOVE crepes, especially with chocolate and strawberries inside. Sorry can't do that fancy carrot thingy above the 'e.' And if I could choose an accent for myself, it would be a British. Mostly, because of my desire to go to Hogwarts one day. The spells sound so much cooler with the accent : )

Thank you so much for hosting this fun interview, Paula! :)

Thank you very much, Juli. Best of luck finding the perfect home for OPPOSITION. Please keep us posted!!

Be sure to check out Juli's blog where you'll find awesome reviews, cool interviews, and a plethora of writer stuff. (Plethora, that one of the words I like : ) 


YA Author Interview - Writer Spotlight: Elaine Cho

Before I welcome today's writer in the spotlight, I'd like to thank all who commented, tweeted, posted on facebook, and blogged about the book giveaway for THE FAERIE RING, by Kiki Hamilton. Your support and interest in Kiki's book is so appreciated. I wish there could be more than one winner. I did open this internationally (there were some questions about that). 

The winner of THE FAERIE RING is............AEICHA!!!!! Congrats!!! Email me your address and I will get the book out to you today!!

There are more chances to win a copy of Kiki's book.
See the book blog tour lineup on her blog here.

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On to the Writer Spotlight. This is where it all starts (well, after the many drafts are written and slaved over). Maybe in the near future I'll have the chance to give away a copy of the works the writers in my Writer Spotlight pitch here on Write Now : ) How cool would that be?!!!

Today I'm pleased to introduce Elaine Cho. Another amazing writer I connected with at the WriteOnCon conference. Welcome, Elaine!!

Elaine Cho

I have to say, Elaine's use of words in her opening took my breath away. I can't wait for you all to read the excerpt, but try not to skip ahead. 

Not only is Elaine a writer, but an accomplished flutist, as well as a photographer and a superhero : ) Seriously.

What manuscript do you have out on submission now? (genre, title, word count)

FADE is a YA Urban Fantasy novel at 100,000 words.  It’s set in a world where people believe magic is a poison that takes over your soul.  Morality, any love that you held, and your previous beliefs are all inexorably overtaken.

Give us the three to four sentence pitch.

As the daughter of the Anti-Magic Regime leader, Rinoa Calister has never had reason to question her secluded life or the fear of magic that dictates the present society.

Until the day she becomes a sorceress. 

Rinoa is set up for an execution by her father and there she is rescued by an organization composed of the very people she was taught to revile. She is then forced to decide her allegiances as she becomes the cornerstone to both her father’s campaign and the resistance against him. Her decision will help annihilate magic, or crumble the belief system the world stands on.

Oops, that was five sentences.  I hope that’s okay!

: ) Rinoa has a lot on her plate from word one. Nice!!

Would you care to share the opening line or paragraph?

Rinoa often felt that her secrets were what illuminated the moon. Sometimes it was full, brimming over with her unspoken words. Sometimes it was the sliver of a mysterious smile before disappearing into darkness.

The moon would creep with Rinoa from her room at night. Every forbidden step made in the mansion’s darkness yearned to shout of its clandestine nature, but the moon kept its peace.

When there were social events at her mansion, the moon was the only one that saw Rinoa. The moon glowed through the curtain while the sound of talk and string quartets seeped into the pores of her bedroom prison.   Sometimes Rinoa curled up on the ground, her cheek against the wood, so the music throbbed in her bones.

The moon knew what nightmares made her flail at her blankets. It knew why Rinoa snatched the knife from under her mattress to slash away at her sheets even while her eyes were still closed.

And perhaps it understood better than Rinoa did what was going through her mind when she stood before a mirror at night, confronted with a reflection that was more a hologram than a physical figure. It was always a ghostly image, blending into the shadows even as she considered herself. She could reach forward and erase herself with a wipe of a finger, if she dared.

Wow!! Beautiful use of words!! You really hooked me, the tone, the mood, the visuals. Amazing!!

What is your least and most favorite word? Use each in a sentence, writing in the voice of one of your characters from any of your manuscripts.

Oh...this is such a tough question.

I guess for favorite word...I’d have to say rain and...cavort.  Rain because even though I live in California now, I’m definitely a Pacific Northwest, gloomy rain kind of girl.  And cavort because it’s so fun and I wish I could use it more often!

The smell of the rain filled Chase with a sense that was a small part euphoria, but mostly an inexplicable nostalgia.

“It’s really very simple.”  Jem said seriously.  “Either you want to cavort with a fellow under the moonlight, or you don’t.”

As far as least favorite word...It’s going to have to be “look”...Only because as I edit my manuscripts more, I’m finding I use that word too much.  Way too much.  I find instances of:  “he looked as if he...” or “he looked like...” or “she shot him a look” (what kind of look???).  And I’ve used it for lazy fillers between dialogue.  “He looked up.  She looked down.  They looked away.”  Sigh.

I can relate : )

What are you working on while you wait?

I’ve been editing/critiquing a lot of other works by people I met at the fantastic WriteOnCon conference!  It’s always awesome to be reading what others are up to, and it gives me insight on my writing as well. 

I agree, I learn so much when I critique. It's always easier to see what works and what doesn't when reading a wip. And I'm always amazed how different readers can give me such different and helpful tips/comments when reading my wip.  

Other than writing though, I’m making music!  I’m in the midst of obtaining my MFA for Flute Performance in California right now.

Wow (again), multi-talented!! Best of luck.

What book have you read in the past six mo that’s inspired you and why? 

My younger sister recommended Divergent by Veronica Roth to me.  Fantastic.  An addicting read and I became upset when I was interrupted while in the middle of it.  And who doesn’t love a kick-ass protagonist?  It made me ask myself:  How do I write something as engaging as this??  (Am I allowed to say kick-ass?)

LOL : ) Yes, ass-kicking, always makes a good read.

I also recently reread Revolutionary Road by Richard Yates.  It’s a book of incredible contrasts -- so beautiful and yet so heart-wrenching.  You war between loving and despising the characters...I think because they speak your own insecurities.  It’s great also because Yates is amazing at defining the characters through their thoughts and actions.  As a writer, I’m always struggling with that show vs. tell aspect!  I’m a bit of a control-freak writer.

I haven’t read the second, I’ll have to put it on my TRL.

Do you have (if you were a teen, or had when you were a teen) a literary-character crush?

I guess I had a thing for Gilbert Blythe from the Anne of Green Gables.  I have a friend that still refers to my future husband as “your Gilbert”!  I see though from your previous writer interviews, that he’s quite popular.  ; )

Hahaha, yes, he is the popular one.

I honestly fall in love very easily with literary characters, but at the same time I don’t think I’d want to date most of them.  I think the best written relationships are the ones where you fall so hard for the guy, but you can’t imagine him with anyone else but the main girl.  There was a book I read once that had a guy character I loved to pieces...And I was so upset at the end when his love for the main character went unrequited.  Ah why!  I must be a closet romantic.

Good point. I hadn’t thought of it that way. You’re right. Who could imagine Edward with anyone else but Bella? Alone they aren’t as interesting as they are together. Er, okay, so maybe Edward is still interesting on his own, but, I do enjoy watching him struggle with his inability to hear Bella’s thoughts.

Any random fun-facts you’d like to share about yourself?

Ever since I read an article on photographer Yowayowa I’ve been inspired to learn levitation!

Actually, it’s a matter of mastering the self-timer on your camera.  It’s difficult to get the right shot to make it appear as if you’re actually floating in air rather than caught in mid-jump!  And if there are people around while I’m running back and forth from the camera to set it up and jumping up and down in front of it, I get very strange looks (understandably so).  One time, a passerby asked me if I was exercising!

LOL, that's awesome!! My ten year old son does an amazing levitation illusion trick that he learned how to do on You Tube (that involves cutting a giant hole in a pair of good jeans, ahem). He loved your pictures, btw ; )

My friends also think I’m borderline narcoleptic.  I can fall asleep anywhere, anytime, and in any position.  I’ve fallen asleep in an orchestra performance, while standing up, in the trunk of a car, and while riding a rickshaw.  When people ask me why I’m so tired all the time, I tell them it’s because I become a superhero at night.  : )

Hahahaha, love that excuse. I do remember Spiderman having that same problem.

Thank you so much for this opportunity, Paula!  And good luck to you and your manuscript as well.

Thanks, Elaine. It’s been so much fun learning more about you and all your creative achievements. Best of luck finding a home for FADE and keep us posted!! Be sure to visit Elaine's webpage.